Lost in You - Erotic Poetry Written and Performed by Eve
I wrote this poem to try to describe how erotic audio made me feel when I first began to listen to it. But listening to this again, I realize this could also be a reaction to a lover's recorded message. Maybe it's time to encourage people to make erotic audio for each other!
I lost myself in you today…
standing on a swaying carriage
trying not to brush up against strangers
pushing my earbuds in deeper
to drown out the relentless hum and whine
of metal scraping on metal,
facing my own pale reflection
in the clouded glass doors,
staring at magic-marker grafitti
and the cold grey tunnel walls
streaking past.
You spoke, and I don’t remember
whether it was a greeting
or a command,
if it was friendly,
or urgent with need
but just the sound of your voice
made me close my eyes
and let my head fall back
waiting, with a shiver of anticipation
for your next words.
You sounded so comfortable,
so far away from here
lying in bed, maybe
a languid, drowsy quality to your voice
and in an instant I was there
feeling your hand lazily drift
along my thigh, and up
and up
and up…
while you told me
how I make you feel.
That tinge of desire in your voice,
that ache,
that need to touch and feel
to kiss and taste
to hold and guide
to fuck and be fucked
to take and be taken
to writhe and buck
and come undone…
I could hear it all
whispering to me,
pleading with me
begging me to release you
from this torment of lust
that binds us both.
As you touched yourself
I could hear it in your breath
in the pauses and catches
between words
in the small sounds
you probably don’t even know you make.
And as you let your thoughts tumble
freely from your lips
while you brought yourself closer,
as you climbed towards that peak
panting out your pleasure
your mind alive
with images of us,
hard and fast and almost
frenzied…
as your voice climaxed
along with your body
and you cried out in pleasure
letting me hear it ripped from you
almost against your will,
I braced my hand against the glass
so as not to touch myself
biting my lip in exquisite agony
my brow pinched
my eyes squeezed shut
my breath leaving me on a long
slow, jagged gust.
I swayed, gently
along with the carriage
and I was utterly, blissfully alone,
lost in that moment
in you.
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MadWithLust on 2024-04-09 12:27:16 (UTC)
Mmm...so many gorgeous details wrapped up in a poem! It is such a beautiful scene to imagine you all hot and flustered, aching for release... And it's also quite fun to imagine what happens next, a hot shower, maybe long bath, or just diving into bed naked with more audios? swoon
And the first rule of Erotic Audio Love Club is...don't listen if you're not ready to cum! It's a "mistake" I'm sure plenty of people make...I myself had plenty of "unexpected cleanups" when I first started listening to your audios! :P
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stigmatamartyr on 2024-04-06 01:16:12 (UTC)
What wonderful images this poem involves in my mind.. it brought me to tears
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A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:51:56 (UTC)
Oh my! That's so wonderful to hear, thank you! xx
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CheckpointCharlie on 2024-03-26 18:37:45 (UTC)
What a wonderful poem! I've been thinking about making erotic audios again, since I haven't recorded anything in almost a year. And, you know? I think this poem is a very good boost. I might try again one day.
Thank you for these beautiful posts, Eve! ❤️
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A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:52:26 (UTC)
You're so welcome Charlie! I hope you do make erotic audio again - you could even record this poem if you wanted to!
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CheckpointCharlie on 2024-04-06 22:54:57 (UTC)
You know what? I might actually do just that!
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Car54whereartthou on 2024-03-26 02:34:46 (UTC)
What a treat today / tonight! I wasn't able to listen until later, so the anticipation was palpable...and so worth the wait! I know I am compelled to tell you how much I enjoy these verses every time you post a new composition. And I love that the table could so easily be turned with this one and still carry the same intensity, the same heat, the escalation of wanton desire that becomes, like a runaway train, unstoppable for both, two lovers, alone, together!!! I don't know if the symbolism of the listener's setting was intentional, but it worked incredibly well...❤️🔥
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A Eve on 2024-04-06 20:53:00 (UTC)
You got me, the symbolism was intentional (I can't help myself!). Thanks for listening! xx
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Kissesnhugz on 2024-04-13 14:00:38 (UTC)
Maybe for a moment,...,we should talk face to face for a change,,to see eacgothers eyes just a few seconds. Cuz for the while weve known eachother its been like forever without seeing your reaction when you realise I am giving you full attention at that very moment. Sorry its been short but life is calling me again please take care of your loved ones and never stop writing... youre a master at your art... we l9ve you