Deeper (erotic freeverse by me)
Deeper
Just when I think
I can’t possibly feel more
want more
need more…
Just when I think
my eyes have seen
everything that can be called beauty
in your eyes,
Just when I think
my heart can’t beat any faster,
and my breath
can’t catch in my throat
any more than it already does,
You take me deeper.
Just when I think
I’ve found perfection
in your trembling touch,
heaven in your smile,
and something like home
in the sweet music of your laugh,
Just when I think
I can’t crave your body
more than I do now,
can’t ache for your warmth
and hunger for release
in the shelter of your arms,
Just when I think
there is no greater pleasure
than giving myself to you
in every way a person can
You take me deeper…
You unfold before me
like a desert bloom
welcoming, alluring
verdant with sensual promise
and lush pleasure,
You pull me in,
deeper
and deeper
until I’m joined with you
in that most primal
and savage of ways…
You surround me, engulf me
drag from my ragged voice
sounds of pleasure and pain,
of sweet agony and desperation
as my body obeys your
skillful commands.
And just when I think
I can’t possibly be any deeper
lost in your depths and
utterly yours,
you turn your eyes up to me
and smile
and I know
that I am only
just barely
skimming
the surface.
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A Eve on 2023-12-05 20:54:51 (UTC)
That spark is everything, isn't it?
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CheckpointCharlie on 2023-12-03 20:15:04 (UTC)
I love these sensual and erotic poems! Stimulating for both body and mind.
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A Eve on 2023-12-05 20:54:18 (UTC)
Thank you!
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Car54whereartthou on 2023-11-30 04:54:46 (UTC)
It's been too long Eve. This lovely and sweet, and oh so sensual, warm and loving... and a promise of being never ending! I love it when you surprise us with such erotic verse that leaves an almost trembling ache, ah!
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A Eve on 2023-12-05 20:54:35 (UTC)
Trembling ache! That's what I'm going for!
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MadWithLust on 2023-12-05 12:22:15 (UTC)
Mmm...what a powerful piece of freeverse and a moving performance!
I immediately thought physical ("deeper" is just such irresistible sexy talk) but then it felt so emotional...and then got physical again....swoon I love that inseparable intertwining of pure unabashed intimacy and connection!!! You have such a way of capturing that spark! ♥!